Saturday, 21 April 2012

Health Writer's Month: Lupus Poem

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Today's Health Writer's Month topic is:

Health Madlib Poem. Go to : http://languageisavirus.com/cgi-bin/madlibs.pl and fill in the parts of speech and the site will generate a poem for you. Feel free to post the Madlib or edit it to make it better.


Well, here's my great poetic work - which makes no sense, and will never be considered for any literary award!



all in tired

All in tired went my pain sleeping
on a swollen pharmacy of fearful
into the worried appointments .

hot anxious analysis ed unpredictable and ing
the weak weakness before.

cold be they than auto-immune side-effects
the clumsy sore weakness
the sore weak weakness .

hot sore inflammation at a depressed symptoms
the isolated disease before.

joints at pills went my pain sleeping
sleeping the medicine down
into the worried appointments .

hot anxious analysis ed unpredictable and ing
the painful tablets before.

sick be they than forgetful sore exercise
the anxious depressed weakness
the confused unpredictable n weakness .

hot confused doctor at a fearful rheumatologist
the chronic physiotherapist before.

weight at rash went my pain sleeping
sleeping the immune system down
into the worried appointments .

hot anxious analysis ed unpredictable and ing
the chronic diagnosis before.

creaky be they than unexplained prescription
the unexpected aching weakness
the medical pharmaceutical weakness .

hot medical fatigue at the tired immune system
the pharmaceutical blood tests before.

All in tired went my pain sleeping
on a swollen pharmacy of fearful
into the worried appointments .

hot anxious analysis ed unpredictable and ing
my diet hurt weight before.

- Iris Carden & e.e. cummings

Create Your Own Madlib on LanguageIsAVirus.com








Written as part of Wego Health: Health Activist Writer's Month Challenge






1 comment:

  1. Health care should always be of wide range. It should also include dental health provisions. I visit my dentist in Champaign IL at least twice a year but I've no medical card that could at least give me discounts on emergency dental care.

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